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by vrosej10

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SweetOblivionSweetOblivionover 13 years ago
I liked this

I'm not sure about "wind at my hindmost" - seems an unfortunate combination of words.

And did you mean wonder at or wander to at line 5?

On the whole your verse still leaves a pleasant taste in the mind. S.O.

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