All Comments on 'Tiffany's Suprise'

This storyline could go anywhere if it was continued

Nice storyline and a good first effort I liked the story. I would suggest you use a program with spell check such as Word it corrects spelling and grammar errors but is not perfect. That along with using a Literotica volunteer editor would improve your story immensely. am a new submitter myself and I learned this the hard way. Overall I liked your story and I hope you continue to share more stories.

you have peeked my interest. ready for chapter 2

Lucky stiff. Hey, what did she mean?

Your story was okay. If you put Tiffany into denial & husband catches her in a lie. Talk more about her response. Expand on how she felt. What it reminded her of. Fine start for a beginning.