All Comments on 'Revenge of the Nerd Ch. 36'

It still seems like you're trying to cram a lot of story into a small space. It feels like someone telling me a story when they've got a time limit.

keep it comming

Discovery is on both sides, but she does seem to have a self-destruct urge.

Very good

I am enjoying your story so much, I just had to join and express my thanks for your efforts. Your characters are so real, I find myself anxiously looking forward to each chapter in their lives. You are doing an excellent job with this story, it is thoroughly enjoyable.

I think it will make a lot more sense after Chapter 39 (which is posted on my site www.peterschulman.com along with the first 38).

Good, I was a bit put off by the last chapter. This one wrapped it up with a nice bow! Thanks!

I've been following the WHOLE story since chapter 15 or so ... is the whole thing finished yet? I want the whole thing!

Keep the chapters coming!

The 21 drinking age was due to 18 yr olds were selling to 16s, would drive drunk, die or kill some one.

19s would sell to 18s, who would sell to 16 etc.

21s don’t mix with 18s, 19s of 16s, which reduced teenage drunk driving deaths.

They brought it on themselves, so I don’t feel sorry for the 18 year olds, not being able to drink.

It's hard to find a story with this many chapters that doesn't rehash and rehash and rehash. I thought maybe this one wouldn't, but by this point it's just, "she's so beautiful. No man can resist her." He lets her put him down, but claims she loves him. But she's gonna change, but shes mean and keeps belittling him. Since she so unbelievably beautiful she's aloud too, LOL!! He should dump her for someone with inner beauty.

I have a feeling the rest of this story will be. She mistreats him he forgives her, she mistreats him he forgives her, she mistreats him he forgives her. I hope it's more than that!