All Comments on 'Bunny Girl Ch. 01'

by MikeyXB

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
...I only hope I can achieve this without causing offence.

I liked this story and look forward to how it will develop - I used part of your own comment as a title ONLY to reiterate that whatever anyone writes, it will probably offend someone else.

Me? 4*s! Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Wrong Category

I assume you plan to take the story in certain direction, but for now the theme isn't really nonconsent as much as a lesbian or erotic couplings. Figured that was worth mentioning since you seem so concerned about not offending your readership. Moving to a different category will bring in a totally different crowd.

MikeyXBMikeyXBover 13 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the comments

I'd like to say thanks for all the comments so far :)

The reference to not wishing to offend was amended at the last minute so has probably added confusion.

It was a hidden (poorly it seems) reference on my part. Primarily if the nameless individual ever stumbled across my story. I'm guessing there aren't many real life instances of starting the evening as a Bunny Girl and ending up in a cassock, blissfully unaware of what occurred.

As for my chosen topic group, point taken. I did mull over which one to pick and struggled, but will hopefully be clearer with the next part :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
"Not too shabby."

I've actually only ever heard another person in real life say this. An artist who lives in Iowa Ciity.

He said this quite a few times. Actually.

I've got a brain like a vice. An I know how to use it!

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