All Comments on 'Taking Orders'

And I really mean it. Really well written, original and very erotic! Have favorited this story. Keep up the awesome work.

...this was obviously written by a well-educated, young, southern hottie, who loves to fuck. These days farm hands are called "Mexicans", sugar. Keep writing! You really are a good writer and this first story is erotic!

Very well written and very erotic. You are quite wordly in a very heady sense for a woman of such age as yours. Thanks for sharing!

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RikyJ

rikyj@att.net

Loved the gradual building of the simmering feelings of desire, resentment, lust and all the rest that made the story so hot. Well done. I'll look forward to reading more from this promising new author.

keep writing really enjoyed it

I want more!