by jrand4
too bad he lost his wife and she will never be his loving wife again. sick
Now she's a fucking whore and her husband is a cuckold wimp! I hated this story!
And I especially love Christmas stories about sexy Hotwives giving their husbands what they want for the big day!
What's the heading mean?
Simple it's a number that is more that twice jrand4's IQ.
Any moron who writes a story that presents such an unrealistic image of a male would have to be pushing it to have an IQ in double figures (for jrand4 that means more than 9).
All this story tells us is how to destroy a marriage, with a man who doesn't love his wife and a woman who doesn't love her husband, while the readers are expected to be stupid enough to believe statements of proclaimed love.
You would be better off writing stories about how Christmas is actually a terrorist plot to destroy the west by getting everyone fat from over eating and lazy from sitting in front of TVs playing PS & Wii.
Do the world a favor jrand4 cancel you internet service sell your computer and crawl back under the rock you came from, where I'm sure your species mates in a fashion similar to your story.
Turns out that it is just another wimp cuckold husband story. Wife finds stud, wife screws stud, wife "loves" husband, but is never going to be satisfied with him again...husband agrees and wimps out. I like open marriages, but this wimp, cuckold just is a major turn off to me.
went to the comment section and that was enough . One star for all stories like this till these fucked up people move this shit to group sex/fetish
Thought it was an interesting and written well Not my cup of tea but these stories get me pissed off whihc is why I read them.
because that is as low as can be given. Wrong category and he such a pussy whipped wimp.
It's a special kind of wimp that loves to have his wife tell him about guys she's fucked..while he playes with his little dicky...
If this story is based on truth, you author have a problem. If fiction, the reality of a very conservative sexual wife becoming a full blown slut is very difficult to swallow. You writing ability has promise, your theme, I'm afraid, will be bashed by many. You're joining the countless new authors this year who cater to the wimpy humiliating cuckold lovers. Too bad, you couldn't channel your talent elsewhere. ML
...reading your excellent tale, or the numerous predictable slags from the ever-vigilant loving-wives troll who's now going by various names as well as the courageous "Anonymous".
Don't leave Jack out in the cold though. How about John coming over and working wifey over in front of hubby for the next story. Then the third installment can entail hubby coming home and finding Jack there taking his lovely wife for his own selfish pleasure.
it always amazes me that people read stories in this section and criticise the nature of the content. Don't listen to them, keep writing, you're doing a great job.
it amazes me how people like VEXTER can express their opinion but don't want people who don't share their opinion to have one. Take the cock out of your mouth and mind your own business hitler.
There really is one born every minute. The woman you are married to, someone who deosn't love or respect you, has played you for a fool. A cuckold wimp pathetic fool. That is what you are. She is a slut/whore you are a stupid pathetic wimp cuckold fool. You deserve each other. I hope you both die of Aids.
the ever growing need for the cuckold lovers to bash those that don't share their opinion for this fetish. Shame they can't just praise the author that feed their fetish, but have to make worthless comments to those that disagree with their lifestyle. ML
Your protagonist got just what he asked for. Hope he can deal with the aftermath. Saw where this was going when he suggested '5' to his wife, which she described as a slut. What do sluts do? This makes him a cuck and the Genie's not going back in the bottle.
If this were not a story, I'd put money on them not being together in five years; and, I'm not a betting man.
As soon as she mentioned the word "slut" he should have known. He should have stopped at 3, and tested the waters. I hope he enjoys his present.
Look boys if you don't like having sex with a woman why not simply leave then alone,not marry them and let them go on with their lives without you. This stupid crap of marrying them and then dreaming of them cheating on you is such a waste of effort. It's simply idiotic.
Just another sicko writer into self disrespect and male humiliation.<P>
Why does this self denigration crap excite these weak jaded spineless wanna be wimps?<P>
Sadly sick writer - you need help - soon.
women don't talk like that! That was a mix between soap-opera and political speach. Totaly un-erotic.
You've created some good characters, please write a continuation.
And ignore the troll(s). They post the same garbage on all loving wives stories, probably without even reading them. It's a compulsion driven by SPA (small penis anxiety).
It has a compulsion to insult every other point of view it comes in contact with. It is incapable of accepting another persons viewpoint. It is a sad lonely figure that trolls comments. Your story still sucks though. Cuckold assholes like you do not deserve to live.
1 STAR. When will the webmasters create a cuckold wimp/slut/whore category. That is where this shit belongs.
To those who don't like cuckold stories: Why do you read them?
I am sure there are some insecure guys around that love this type of story, you just need to find the right section to put it in. This is Loving Wives, not Slut Wives.
She already was a slut and is just now is dumping on him. He is dumber then a bed post.
Dump her ass and buy John a bottle of good Scotch for revealing the worthless tramp she is.
Hell sell her to a slum pimp, make some money. When shes dead in two years collect the insurance. WIN-WIN-who the fuck cares.
probably don't even read them, so don't take their criticism seriously. They're just trolls stiring shit out of a pathetic need for attention. Either that or they do find these stories exciting and can't face up to their own sexuality so that they have to tear down others who can. Like men who can't stop thinking about having sex with men, but find the idea so contrary to their self image that they go around hating gays.
The sickness is in the compulsive hatred, not in what some people find erotic.
probably don't even read them, so don't take their criticism seriously. They're just trolls stiring shit out of a pathetic need for attention. Either that or they do find these stories exciting and can't face up to their own sexuality so that they have to tear down others who can. Like men who can't stop thinking about having sex with men, but find the idea so contrary to their self image that they go around hating gays.
The sickness is in the compulsive hatred, not in what some people find erotic.
Agree with the original post...if people don't want like these types of stories, why read them?
Very well done, although the wife's reservations towards doing what she did could have been prolonged...as well as stretching out the photographic series a bit more.
Still, goo read and exciting...keep it up!
Very well written, the story was hot and the wife must be very pretty. One the better stories I have read in a long time, it sounds true.
Loved it. 'Turning the pages' with the pictures got me rock hard! Well done.
Be careful what you wish for, you just MAY get it! (although it sounds like you don't mind that she'll be boffing a guy with a big potbelly more and more!). On that assumption, 4*
(if assumption is wrong, then you should have opted for level 3)
I hope they both enjoyed her game. Now comes the divorce from the slut. I hope she enjoys that too. She earned it. She might consider a trip to the free clinic to get tested. Nasty behavior elicits nasty surprises. She earned that too.
Use the pics and video in the divorce and kick the whore to the street. Then sue the two bastards responsible and move on.
Congratulations!!!!!!!!
Excellent story!!!
I love the way you write, how you increase the level of exciting throughout the story!!! 5 stars!!!
At least she supplied him proof for the divorce. When reality and fantasy collide, consequences can be a bitch.
Really she went far, and used the excuse of #5 to cheat. But if was weak enough to accepted it and even like it, who are we to desagree? With me she would go pass the Christmas and forever with the lover!!!
Don't understand why so me commenters don't realize that the true motivation of the wimpy,cuckold husband here is to be totally humiliated.The tiny-dicked husband is void of self-worth and wants his wife to see him for what he is,and add some more fuel to the fire!
If the writer hadn't wimped out,and actually wrote a 2nd chapter,we could have read about how Wimpy joined his wife on the bed and was made airtight by Fatso and Donkey Dong. Then while DD was fucking the shit out of wifey,Fatso was having his ass sucked by Wimpy,who sucked the shit out of him.
It's ALL a bunch of SICK SHIT,which I truly hope is fiction. I'd hate to think that the many wimpy cuckolds who populate so many stories on this sight are actuactually slithering amongst us!
(ps : To all of the nutless cucks who will say that I don't understand,I say,"You're right,thank Christ!"
She is now no longer a loving wife she has deliberately cuckolded him supposedly as a Xmas present, it didn't matter which number he chose, number 5 had already been done, she used sleight of hand to get him to opt for 5. I hope he has balls and kicks her out but he seems to be dithering and may turn out to be a wimp and letting his wife whore around the slut.
Drop her off at his place with nothing but a couple of garbage bags of her crap, change the locks, burn the rest of her shit and take a holiday cruise. Maybe find a better woman.
Be careful what you wish for.
Well, it's his own fault, she warned him against number 5. But she must have wanted something like that all along for her to have even put number 5 on the list in the first place.
Pour Doug.
ROFLMFAO
Trying really hard to make it seem like cucking involves love....it does not, it never has and it never will. Some idiots think it does but it involves selfishness, an ability to disconnect the love you have for your partner, and a healthy does of disrespect...though that comes a little down the road.
And that, my dear closet queen, is why cuck couples marriages almost never survive.
Wow. That went south quickly. I always am surprised how many people love this cuck shit. It kinda sickens me. His "loving wife" is not his anymore. Might as well call it a day and start the divorce paperwork. Merry fuckin Christmas. How to kill your relationship real quickly. Of course if she's this willing to do all that sex stuff at the drop of a hat, would you really want her as your wife? Start packing.
Good story. Do not be put off by the haters. Carry on writing and enjoy the experience
it is a very nice thing to do for your wife and get her a big cock for Christmas eve