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All Comments on 'Room Servicing'

by al_Ussa

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Dismal writing.

Every cliche in the book. And how many times did you say she was a sexy hot Latina? We knew that at the start, it didn't need repeating.

One of the most awful and completely un-erotic stories I've read on lit, and I've read many.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Give the guy a break

OK, so a few cliches, but they got to BE cliches because they're good. Keep working on it, al_Ussa.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Excellent short story

Excellent short story. Good build up and finish.

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