by RoseBrn
I liked the way you wrote this, it was believable and wonderful. If it is a trifle clinical I can only thank you. I have no idea how anyone could make that criticism. Anything else would have been inadequate. I think that it is one of the best stories I have read for some time, the simplicity is endearing and refreshing, the story honest and so delightfully human. Thank you.
I found this an honest and moving account of that awkward early stumble into sex. Half bliss, half hell. Thanks.