by cumcovered
Good story, more brothers and sisters should help each other out. Some realistic elements. Many brothers wish would happen to them
grat story, would love to hear more true life stories... does she let you fuck her tits?
wheres the rest of the story? does he get to fuck her ? does he give her oral also? do the parents find out if so what do they say? what happens when she graduates high school? you left a lot of questions unanswered about time you finished the story isn't it.
18 to 22 years old, so maybe still a late teenager. I bet he was hard when he wrote this excellent tale and probably shot a good healthy load at the end. Not too many of his devoted readers would be surprised if young Mr. cumcovered (great name) is getting regularly sucked off by his cute little sister and unloading his hot young balls in his sis's warm and tender little mouth. Way to go, young buddy!
1) very poor writing you used a lot of wrong words or left them out all together very sloppy.
2) no background or character development to tell what their relationship was like before.
3) no reason why she suddenly asked to suck his cock and he never wondered way to unrealistic and duumb.
4) no end you just left us hanging with less than half a story and half a story is worse than no story at all. we need to know if he fucks her, if the parents find out and how long it continues. get off your lazy ass and finish it and think about a rewrite for this chapter also.
When I was 18 and my sister was 20 she went through this strange phase that whenever our parents weren't around, she'd tease me: e.g. nude sunbathing, walking from the shower to her bedroom naked, "forgetting" to wear panties or a bra under her dress, etc. I'd almost forgotten about that little period of my life till this story reminded me; I simply can't imagine my sister carrying on like that now!
Yes, so arousing and a very good story !! Its so interesting how relationships among sisters and brothers can be. I had a few friends who let me in on what their sisters did sometimes with them and most times with someone else; but they were always hot & nasty. Very interesting...... I hope you write another chapter so we can see how sis is after her brother graduates from college ?? Maybe, she will move in ith him to save money and get her treat more than once a day. He might own a business someday and she could work with him and have special benefits only for them. Thank you.
I really wish I was able to see my sister naked. I really want to put my dick in her pussy. I want to lick her pussy. I touched her boobs a couple of times without her noticing.
This really happened, God your pathetic and it is fake like all the rest. Poorly written and completely unbelievable as fuck. Get a better hobby.