by hey1234a
i think u should put them going to the gym everyday and a little latter each time
Ive often dreamed of fucking my brother in the shower .but never did.
yes this story did make me horny but it wasn't brilliantly written, next time include more detail and consider a more dramatic plot line, did the brother really just go along with it? Next time don't describe the characters in the first paragraph, spread it out more, i do want to see a sequel
I loved it so far. You stoped with a cliff hanger. You need to finish it, or keep going.
PLEASE..............THANK YOU
of this excellent story is 18 to 22 years old? So maybe a late teenager. His hot young balls are stimulated to the max by the idea of brothers fucking each other, which is getting to be pretty mainstream nowadays. Why the heck not? Both brothers have big stiff pricks and warm wet mouths and assholes. And a pair of heavy loaded balls they just have to unload all the time. I hope and trust that Hey has gotten brotherly and other family dick up his tender twat, over and over again. Of course every family needs a devoted cocksucker, so he's doubtless made his lips, tongue, and mouth available to his brothers, his dad, uncles, and male cousins for them to use whenever they need to empty their balls. It should just be understood within the family that the boy's mouth and tight little cunt are there to be flooded with all the warm semen sloshing around in all the family balls.
I sure didn't mind fapping off to this, but next time try to lengthen the story, add a backdrop. Please proofread your work as well, several times you said finer when referencing finger. Just read it over before you publish, and if it's not to embarrassing share it and get opinions on it.
So hot, is it real? Also add to it if you can with a follow up as to what happened in the following days and months
Maybe you should try to use more vivid words and describe it better
Mike spat out Mike's cock
you can't bother to get the names right or edit- why should we care?
& why would the larger muscled/dicked bro allow his petite fem bro to fuck him?
i'd think it would be the other way around
You need to care enough for your stories to edit them - also: why oh why confuse "their" and "there" ?
You wrote: "A LITTLE EXCITED THEIR CHAMP" which is incorrect;
it should be "A LITTLE EXCITED THERE CHAMP"
There are other mistakes. You must be careful because you are putting your stories out there - to the public ...
It was amazing I hope you write the second one and please add a rim job to the story
The likelihood that twin boys never saw each other naked or never played at sex before the age of 18, doesn't fly
The best part of having sex with my brother was swallowing his load and french kissing me deeply. He swallowed my load as well.