All Comments on 'Light Up Ch. 01'

An almost flawless beginning. Five stars, with room to spare.

I want to read more!

Thank you. Great set-up, neither of them wanting anything - you can just sort of imagine where that's going to go, lol!

very good start. looks promising. However i can't figure out how to pronounce rhys.

looking forward to reading the rest of this. keep up the good work!

Please don't keep us waiting long xx

great start

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Mariasmd I can help you with that

Rhys \

rh-ys\ is pronounced rees. It is of Welsh origin, and the meaning of Rhys is "enthusiasm". Native Welsh form of Reece.

I don't usually read this category but I'll be looking for updates now.

I almost fell asleep reading this, I did not finish reading because i just could not get into it. Goo luck to you.

Keep writing, nothing is wrong with your story. Sure, it is not for everyone, and perhaps even, you will bore some without imagination. I like the story and looking forward to the next chapter.

I really like where you're going with this story. I hope you update regularly. Keep up the good work.

Thanks for a good read. Looking forward to reading more. Thanks

Came across this story today. Indeed a nice start and do hope you can continue.