All Comments on 'Paparazzi'

I kind of liked it I think this is a good ending

And neither of us acting.

but this line where it is may be better (than the last line)

And I am not smiling

I'm serious - a toss away line that introduces critical information for good effect.

I always enjoy your literary style and reading your work. This one - there is something about this particular poem that speaks to me. It is perfect. I had almost forgotten him - this sparks the memory. Thank you.