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too too kind!
I cannot wait for the next chapter! As always lovin it!
great chapter
i'll be honest and tell u that this is a story i dip in and out of and so i havent read every chapter, but this was exceptionally funny. I also like that although jeff had everything undercontrol (too much perhaps?) it was lovely that he didnt make ashleigh feel like she was pushed aside. Good job!
Good as always
The couple left pieces of Father all over the living room.
What a way to start the day
I couldn't stop laughing. Hat's off to you, RP. I cannot wait for the next...
Great
Great Dialogue, I love it! Thanks
Over the top
Jeff is so over the top at times that I have to laugh. I guess this is one of those "you had to be there" things. Please keep on doing what you are doing, I love it.
greatness
best chapter yet, loved the dialog. keep it up
yep a thousand cuts
sounds like to me there was more then a thousand little cuts... and when they say they are going to go into debt because the old bastard wants to turn it into a bussiness affair.... was great! Where can I find a three Jeff's for my three daughters?????
It's getting better all the time
I am happy with the expansion of this story. Jeff is a riot.
By the way should'nt somebody pull http://bollyscandalvideos.blogspot.com down?
What an assholes to misuse "our" site.
spam and chapter 44
As soon as I see crap like that I delete it. I leave comments that say derogatory things about me, but nobody should have to put up with spam.
Lit has specified 12/19 for Chapter 44 to be posted though that could be anywhere between midnight and 11:59.
Chapters may slow down because I have to write the ending (past Chapter 57), but my research allowed me to finish Chapter 46.
Chapter 45 should be up on my site some time today. The next thing I have planned is a final (more acurately, the 7th or 8th final edit) edit. - RP
Chicago!
Reminds me of Richard Gere doing the lawyers tap dance in the movie Chicago. Excellent.
I can't figure out why I am reading this, but I keep on doin' it. This chapter has been lurking in the line up of chapters for some time. Maybe it it is that tension that keeps me interested.
Artful, RPSuch. Thanks.
Yes!
What a fantastic chapter. I love the confident Jeff!
Very Good
The best part of this chapter is that the daughter, his superior girlfriend, should be realizing how much a man that her idiot savant, Jeff, can be when he wants to show it to her...
The story is suddenly getting interesting again. He is no longer the "Little Willie" that she is embarrassed to be with when around her slightly older friends or even her family. I assume she will become likeable and changed again from here on... Hey, at least I am getting into your story...chapter by chapter! Love it at times, dislike it at times.
Great!
What can I say, I'm a sucker for giving it to people who deserve it, long and dirty. And if it is brilliant on top... that's really fantastic entertainment!
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