by Virginiawild
This was a very erotic and quick read. I would have liked a more detailed description of both women's looks and bodies. That would have given me more time to masturbate before reaching the end of the story. ha ha
Yes it could've been longer, more detailed. Sometimes the thought that spawns another person's imagination is the best.
It made me realize that I don't define eye movement enough, so you taught me something here in that quick , erotic moment of lust turning to love...
can you tell I like your style:)
please keep writing!