by pervinplainpackage
. . . and jumped way too fast to the 'submission' thing. Not believable that anyone would succumb with no advance planning. Sorry, didn't like your story.
I stopped reading half-way down the page, it was pretty obvious where this was going. Maybe you could trash out the husbands in a different
catagory? When I read group sex I expect everyone to have fun.
max52
I echo the too fast thought. Also, maybe you were inspired by another story? I swear I have read a very similar story before.
I do hope you continue this story. It seems like it could get quite hot!
Jbilove (a bisexual male submissive/slave/slut)