All Comments on 'Dionysian Cove'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
You left out a lot . . .

. . . and jumped way too fast to the 'submission' thing. Not believable that anyone would succumb with no advance planning. Sorry, didn't like your story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
BDSM?

I stopped reading half-way down the page, it was pretty obvious where this was going. Maybe you could trash out the husbands in a different

catagory? When I read group sex I expect everyone to have fun.

max52

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
hmm

I echo the too fast thought. Also, maybe you were inspired by another story? I swear I have read a very similar story before.

jbilovejbiloveover 13 years ago
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I do hope you continue this story. It seems like it could get quite hot!

Jbilove (a bisexual male submissive/slave/slut)

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