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Prince Charming Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous12/22/10

My my

Hopefully Tommy will see without getting hurt by some jerk that Nick is the guy for him.

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by me7112/22/10

Awwww.....

I'm soo in love with Nick. *sigh* Pity I'm not male. ;)

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by manda12612/22/10

Wow!

Oh please don't let Chase screw this up!

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by uchena12/22/10

So Beautiful

This is such a great story! i'm captivated. Awaiting the next chapter and I REALLY hope Chase falls off the face of the planet!

Happy Writing and Happy Holidays!!!

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by gw031312/22/10

Sweet so sweet

I will be eagerly awaiting more....lol...dating practice.

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by Contest4Jen12/22/10

Huge, Face-filling Smile! :D

That was so cute and sweet. I loved it! I can't wait for more! I hope that Chase doesnt break tommy's heart too bad and he can just realise instead that Nick is the one for him. Cheers :D

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by SoullessCynner12/22/10

Innocently Sweet

Tommy is so.... Virginal. He's sweet and adorable. Nick's awesome, too. So far, I'm loving this series. Keep up the good work, Alana.

--Soulless

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by ZombieQueen12/22/10

love this, please keep going. Its a sweet version of the safe best friend lovestory but you make it new.

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by afrodita7912/22/10

want more

I'm loving it hope Tommy realices before it's to late... que writing hope to read more soon....
Big fan love all your stories...

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by midnighter43212/22/10

wow

its def. going to be weird between them because nick is in love with him and is going to want more ...? i hope :) great writing i cant wait till the next one im really enjoying this little romance...please keep it up

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by Anonymous12/23/10

Love it love it love it!!! I so want Nick and Tommy to be together

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by gayTopher12/23/10

love it

Am so loving this story.

I am a sap for slow simmering romance and this with a twist of unrequited love...

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by chopejem12/28/10

More!

Please gimme more. Totaly love your work.

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by Anonymous12/31/10

awesome

I am totally loving.. first i check your page every day for three weeks for an update.. and when i don't, It turns out you come up with this brilliance!!

Please keep it up!! i'm taking your word for the next part coming soon.

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by Anonymous01/03/11

love it!

this chapter was amazing! I can't wait to see what happens next. Very good story. I'm ALWAYS checking for new stuff from you. amazing. can't wait till the next chapter!

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by WickedWendyDru01/05/11

Your Boys & My Boys

should hit a club together and go dancing some night... As long as Ash keeps his mouth shut and behaves, a fairly good time could be had by all, I think. Wanna give it a try?

Awesome job, as always, my girl. Really enjoying this. Keep up the good work! ~Wicked

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by unlively01/10/11

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Excellent entry. Very intimate in scope--they never even left the room, it was nobody but the two of them: it felt warm and close and cold outside just like winter break in the dorm should. Significant, but not *too* much happened; you didn't, as the cliche goes, give away the farm. A lovely little bit of development.

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by Anonymous07/27/12

I loooove it!!! Pls tell me Chase won't show up and ruin everything.

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by Anonymous08/22/12

Please Chase can not fuck this up...it's so sweet

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by Anonymous04/21/13

This is so sweet - that ending is just . . . ahhhhhrrrrrr . . .

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by daireto10/13/13

so gorgeous

What sweet men

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by Hubbys_Princess03/27/14

but... but....

They are more than friends already it seems to me they are in a relationship just minus the sex.... But Tommy is inexperienced to recognise it and Nick too bust swooning to see it ... Bless them it's very cute amd sweet and holds so much innocence.

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