All Comments on 'The Pool Boy'

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BarbaraBarbaraover 13 years ago
Goody Goody! Nice Try? Worth a 5 this time.

'Boys' throughout Southern France are no better than Gigilos, perving at middle aged naked ladies still sensual & active enough to score at sexual enticement. Reality is that these men are taking on private jobs with the sole purpose of satisfying rich divorcees loaded with foreign currency! Cest la Vie?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Pardon?

I like your writing. You have a nice, easy style. I thought you could have made a bit more of the way the misunderstanding developed and played out, and the ending was a bit abrupt. Gave it 4.

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