All Comments on 'Odette from Odessa'

He is not sure he personally finds it erotic, meaning that it is not in the least arousing to him, but the otherwise grim tale is made memorable to him by the semi-rhyme of some of the lines ("loudly," "belly,", "twenty") and the approximation of ballad meter, particularly in the first half.

.......expecting something very different from the title but I do like this and agree with PoetGuy, it is quite erotic in an obtuse way.

Tess

it was, I am. It is not erotic, but 100, very good. My faith in you is being rewarded.