All Comments on 'Painting Donovan Ch. 03'

i really loved this story. reminded me of when my brother and i used to...

One of my fave stories! Keep writing!

what a way to interupt lol! I hope you don't leave it there.

i cant wait to read what happens next!

Come on. You can't keep us hanging like this. Don't keep us waiting too long for the next instalment.

Continue because I seriously love your writing.

I have to read more. It was absolutely amazing and it can't be left like that.

I'm like evryone else, there is no way that you can leave us hangin like this. PLEASE make another chapter, and LONGER the next time.

Oh my God. That was damn hot. I loved it. Please, please, PLEASE don't leave this story as is. You should definitely write another, longer chapter. I will be eternally grateful to you. I love your writing.

--Soulless

Very good cliff hanger until your next instalment, hopefully.

That was FUCKING AMAZING! Please, please, PLEASE write the next chapter - your writing is unbelievable! :D

-- Mitch

so hot! I've just read the whole story and hope there's more!

That was soo hot! Can't wait to see what happens next.

Please post the next chapter, this is great writing!!!

you do not know how hot this is...please keep writing it...if its not the best its one of the most "WOW" stories here...write more of it...its so amazing

This sorry is so hot i keep reading it over and over again, i wish i had a brother like him. Please write the next chapter.

You are so amazing! I love these stories. NEXT CHAPTER PLEEEASE!!!

This is the hottest and most romantic story I have ever read!!! Please write more!!!! Please you have top!!

i wanna find out what happend ur such an amazing writer plz write more

You are a great fucking writer...like I can't stop reading its just so good..like heaven in every sequencial happenings between the two....LOVE IT..LOVE UR WRITING TECHNIQUES

Oh, shit, it's so hot, but this doesn't bode well for Darren... Don, either. Incest is kinky, NOT family-friendly.

I hope Chapter 5 wasn't the last one, I really wanna read about Darren on top, oh and a question, it said that Darren and Donovan had the same eyes, that they had blue-green eyes, I think it was on the first or second chapter, then when they go home for Ashley's B-Day, it said that they both had the same brown eyes, did i understand wrong?BTW, AMAZING, INCREDIBLE, HOT incest story, its the only one I've read that has more than a chapter.Love it and keep up the good work.

Darren and Donovan are so great together they make me hot.

OMG UR WRITING IS AMAZINGGGGGH!!! I wish you'd write more stories!!

In my mind I'm picturing Darren painting Don's lightning struck profile at some point in the future. Loving this story. Love it even more that they got caught. But I sense that Ashleys cool. Gonna get to reading to find out more.