All Comments on 'Dirty Talking Lovers'

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FantazmasterFantazmasterover 13 years ago
Intense,But Brief

The author does an excellent job of setting the scene,but the dirty talk scene was entirely too brief.Perhaps the last lines referring to an all night session will lead to yet another chapter and more dirty talk.

TammiBadgerTammiBadgerover 13 years ago
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I like a story where the woman keeps her boots on in bed.

jrt20jrt20over 2 years ago

Wish it had gotten rougher

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Excellent...but too short

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