by rpsuch
keeps getting better and better with each chapter just wish they where longer
I just don't tire of the interaction of the characters. I am loving this story.
Consumating the engagement sounds like fun, though you begin to wonder if they will have anything left for the honeymoon...
and real chili always has beans. Still so loving this story! I was sad it took so long to get this page, please keep them coming = )
This is so hard to accomplish in writing. Even joyfully read the dialogue about the ring which is so true it is terminally cute. A great chapter and great writing. In chili I use bison and pork. After doing research on lard including ones using different techniques my conclusion is 180 from mainstream medicine. Lard and fats from non factory farm sources are necessary and healthy. So we use lard. Mainstream medicine is great for trauma situations and acute care. For aging and chronic care it sucks and often kills the patient.
you are a good writer but I do tire of the interaction between the characters, this is dragging a little
Most of the chili that I have eaten across the country has beans in it. Chili is a meal. It is either that or the ground beef that you get on hot dogs. Hell, even fast food chili has beans in it. The chili fight aside, it is still a good story.
I've enjoyed every chapter, and each new one is worth waiting for.
I love the way this has a Romeo & Juliet feel, as well as the contrasting qualities between the two families. All of Jeff's family is warm and caring; and in contrast, Ashley's father impresses as cold and heartless. Jeff and Ashley's love just gets more and more intense with with time regardless of opposing circumstances.
Looking forward to more!
Love the interaction. Who would have thought cooking could be erotic? :)
Keep up the good work!
That's where the romance kicks in. After 33 years, my wife interact a lot this way instead of a lot of sex anymore. It's fun and feels like we still care about one another. Great chapter...in my view. Without interaction and intimacy...what do you have left that is romantic?