All Comments on 'New Year's Eve Seduction'

a pretty gud one

This has to be the start of a beautiful relationship. Let's have more please

Great start.

Needs more chapters.

As a side point,I don't know if it's world wide, but Centrum is a vitamin suppliment here in Australia.

I wonder how she felt the next morning when she got out of bed with her son's sperm still dripping out of her pussy.

I would hope that she would be wanting to be with her new lover as soon as she could get with him.

That would be a great way to start the new year.

Thanks

Bad parents for calling their son Eric. Need to move to the U.k were you can booze it up from 18 too.

with this fine story. The subtitle in the Literotica listing terms this ... ".Mother and son do the unthinkable........" Now how can such a loving relationship be called unthinkable?

But your habit of making almost every sentence a paragraph of its own makes my eyes swim.

for a vitamin tablet in the USA as well. They make a special formulation for those over 50. Maybe Mama had some. Good hot sex, good plot line--keep writing.

Oh absolutely great, mind blowing cums

What about a followup

Since I'm surely not going to READ what you wrote (wink), let me guess what a the kind of mother and son YOU have in mind would do that YOU would find unbelievable:

Both make a resolution for the New Year to seek

individual spiritual and phsychological (psychiatric,

if necessary) help to end their overwhelmingly

self- and other-destructive sexual behavior with

each other?

Well? Did I get it right? : )

More ceriously "centrum,"* haven't you written other porn for Literotica which is not based on mentally ill behavior? (I seem to recall reading some of it at some time.) Why don't you get some help so that you can write just sane eroitca?

Best wishes for a truly joyful 2012 and healing in your life.** We all need that, y'know? Some seek it; some don't.

___________________________

*Isn't that some kind of rx medication?

**Are you among those very rare (Thank God!)

folks who was sexually abused as a child by

your mother, or was someone else the

molester? In any case get some help,

man! Nobody as an adult needs to continue

to live his live in the kind of misery you

experience!

really needed it. She will be back later that night to finish what she started.

I enjoyed this story hope you continue this story line...

well written and most importantly believable. thanks

Well done. This story cries out for a follow-up. Thanks for posting.

Its a nice way to start a new year.

If there is a followup story I think that Janice will make an apearance in the bedroom before the party ends.

Maybe even a threesome with his mother.

I wish you a happy 2011 with a lot of nice stories to tell.

This was very nicely done. I can't imagine Mom not going down for more after she gets rid of her guests. Hopefully, you'll let us know what happened.

nice story...hope that load of sperm he deposited does the trick and made his mom a mom again.

great story, it definietly kept my dick hard. i hope janice comes down and fuck maybe while the mom watches.

Excellent story - you just know deep down that Diane will be coming back for a lot more of her sons' cock. Maybe he'll breed her, lucky boy!

Absolutely brilliant story.

One of the best I have read.

Would be nice to see a sequel.

Commenter William Smyth has it right. Motherfucking is "unthinkable"?! It's what PLENTY of young guys and PLENTY of their moms think about all the time! Look, a boy's got a stiff fat prick (no other cocks are nearly as stiff!), his mother's got a wet cunt that cries out to be filled with a REALLY hard dick, and the solution is obvious--as many thousands of moms and their boys are happily finding out every day. Easy as pie--as his mother's tasty hair pie!--the son bends his mother, nude from the waist down, over the kitchen table or up against the wall, and shoves his big prick up his own mother's twat. Where else does a boy's prick belong except up his own birth canal? He came down it years ago, and it's such fucken fun to go back up he's tingling all over and grinning ear to ear! Mothers love all the rich cream their son's got waiting for them in his hot young balls, rich and POTENT, as anon mentioned above. As a boy fucks his mom over and over again, he's sure to fuck a baby--lots of babies!--up his own mother's cunt. The bold young motherfucker swells with pride as his happy contented son-fucked mother shoots out her boy's babies from the same twat he once came out of!

Ineed to hear more this story it was a good story

This is a great story! I wander if it happened for real. Very sexy-mom going to her son, wearing a sexy lacy bra and stockings under her dress for her son to see later. Kissing and then french kissing while dad was asleep upstairs. Mom let him screw her pussy and he was allowed to shoot his load of sperm seed deep inside his own mother's womb. Wow. Can you imagine how exciting it was for a young boy to french kiss his mom and look down and see his sperm seed inside her pussy. I know how he must have felt because I screwed my own mom and she also let me fill her pussy with my sperm. It was the greatest moment of my life!

I assume that the author wrote thew story in the 1st person (I) and then changed everything to the 2nd person (you), but somehow accidentally left a few of the Is behind. Be more careful with editing.

loved the story, it was realistic too!! (if a son fucking a mother is realistic)

With her husband not being there when she needs him she deserves to finaly have a Happy New Year and hopefully it will keep being happy for the two of them.

This was definitely one of the hottest stories I have ever read, it had a special feel to it! loved it, she definitely deserved that!

For a young, virile, adolescent, somewhat sexually inactive male, Eric is very reluctant, timid and reticent about accepting his mother's midnight entree' she's offering him on a silver platter--shortly into the early first hours of New Year's Day!! His mother Diane is pissed she's alone, spending another ringing in the New Year as her husband is, again, passed out drunk!! She finds her son home early from his New Year's eve party after his girlfriend dumped him, and he's also pissed. A match made in heaven--a festive occasion, both alone after being dumped by their dates, both a little high with alcoholic drink, and the count-down for midnight is drawing nigh!

They dance a few slow dances, as they lustily and wantonly grind as their bodies are erotically, animalistically introduced to each other--not as mother and son incestual and carnal lover's but as any rutting male and female--arousing the greatest of all desires as the mating call of nature takes control of their bodies and minds!! Diane invites her son to his basement bedroom, where they satisfy and sate their sexually hungry urges and gender-specific genitalia with a ball-busting fucking! Mom says "...nobody can ever know about this...but that doesn't mean we can't do it again sometime...", slips on only her dress, blows her son a kiss and departs back upstairs to the party!! End of story! What a bummer!

It is a very good story, with one short and quick bout of convenient, stroke-fucking content. The writing is good and for the most part is well constructed, though precise and fast paced. The character's are alive and animated. the dialogue and banter is lively and educationally well written!

good story-quick hot sex-nicely written thanks

Nicely written, I hope there is a follow up story.

hum

If this story were even 1 more page in length, it would have more development between the main characters. Because it was so short all the emotions feel rushed and unrealistic. I don't care how drunk and involved with their own dance partner someone is, a mother and son dancing like that would be noticed by someone!

Now go wake up your husband and sit on his face...give him a taste of the cream pie you made with your son.

Rye and Ginger Ayle

it is not surprising his girl friend dumped him.

This was a nice little story, but I can't help but wonder if mom and son would ever repeat their little New Year's Eve Fuck, or whether they would wait until next year to do it again. It seems like such a waste, to not use suck a nice, hot mommy and her carefully nurtured body more often -- maybe every Day? Then the son could forget all about inexperienced and snooty girlfriends, and concentrate on servicing his loving mom! And maybe, he could look around in his parents' circle of friends, to see how many of the wives are like his mom -- experienced, in good shape, neglected and horny. There may be quite a few of them, starting with Janice, the nice half-juiced friend who had greeted Eric when he git to his parents' party. I bet she would put out at the drop of her panties for a nice, big, horny boy. It might make a nice sequel, to see Eric pursuing and banging his mom's friends, and see the impact on her watching her friends making full use of her son's bodily supply while she was hungering for it herself. That would certainly provide the open door Eric would need to start pounding his mother's pussy, and mouth, and ass in between his servicing the needs of her friends. Anyway, a sequel is worth considering. Keep up the good writing, and Thanx for this First Chapter!

great story but a little too short. I was kind of hoping that it would be at least two or three pages. I love to read into the longer stories. still very erotic and well written. i hope there is a part two in the works! :)

So good! Thank you!

this story is so bloody hot to read you need to write some more of the "lovin" between these two.

LOved it!

Short but hot story.

This is how you do a quickie. Steamy and breathless. Electric. 5/5

(I should point out that there needs to be some proofreading, but it doesn't detract enough to warrant any further comment.)

I would like to see the mother go back and fuck the son again . In the morning have sex with the husband starting with him eating her out. Then when they have fucked like now tomorrow and he eats her out again ,so he may get a mixture sons spunk ,his spunk and his wife’s love juices. I if I was her , every time she fucks the son ,I would make husband clean her out before he fucks her the same day .

Great to be in the right place at the right time.

very hot.....more pleaze...

Beautifully written. No "sizes" mentioned (leave it to the readers imagination) and slow romantic love making instead of a "fuckfest". Fantastic. 10stars. thanks.

What a great tale. Perfect tempo, grammar and spelling. Thanks for your imagination.

Excellent tale. Thanks

(11/10/2022) Okay.., this was Hot!! Quick and Hot! Five stars!

[10.12.22]

Tres Spicy HAWT!

11/10!!!!!

This was decent but not enough plot to it a lot of grey matter really

I’ll never understand people who go straight to fucking and they each take off their own clothes. Undressing your partner, an item at a time, while sucking, licking, caressing each other in the process, is such a great idea. Don’t know why so much porn skips all that. It’s actually a mainstay of most good erotica.

I thoroughly enjoyed this story of mutually consensual incestuous love between mother and son because both characters were mature, accepted what they were doing without guilt, shame, self-recrimination, self-loathing nor self-doubt. Each one knew and understood that the other respected and loved them unconditionally. It would make this story if the author had developed a second chapter devoted to the growth of the affair between mother and son.