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vrosej10vrosej10over 13 years ago
Fair whack at a tanka.

Was that the intention? Has five lines and a pivot line; looks like tanka to me. I'm a fan of Japanese poetry, so you're getting a recommendation.

twelveoonetwelveooneover 13 years ago
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good seeing you back,

I would like to see a Dorthy Parker Tanka

if you handle requests

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