All Comments on 'Christmas Eve at Church'

by Elliebelle

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frenchtoastmanfrenchtoastmanabout 13 years ago

Very sensuous and sexy! My only regret is that Mrs. Grant didn't join in, since she was obviously interested. How about a sequel where Nikki and Ellie finally get their older friend into bed?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

I think Mrs Grant’s preoccupation is upholding the reputation of the church. It’s the fact that she’s so shocked, and that the girls seem to get off on this, or at least carry on regardless, that makes this story so erotic. I’d like to see any sequel pursue these aspects, perhaps with the pastor, rather than it turn into an orgy.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Loved It

Really Loved The Story. I've Done Some Similar Things In Church As A Teenager But Damn It I Never Did That. Love The Way U Think U Had My Imagination Running Wild. I Don't Have A Profile Here But U Can Catch Me On Twitter @Bbwinpr

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Damn

Oh God!! I hope your a girl because if you act like this durin sex then i seriously wanna fuck you. Best thing you could do in church!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
HOT!!!!!

Doing it in a church?! was fucking hot!

loved it! do a sequel?! please?

i came sooooo hard! aha. ;)

gotranegotraneover 9 years ago
Hot With A Sequel!

Great story, but we just have to know what happened with Mrs. Grant! Please follow-up!

JASWritesJASWritesover 7 years ago
Oh my GOD!

PLEASE write another installment with Mrs Grant as a willing participant and the preacher an enthusiastic spectator.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Oh those two naughty girls. Yum.

jenorma2012jenorma2012over 7 years ago
Mrs grant is right

of all the places they could have done this, a church bathroom is not one of them, but still a good story had it taken place somewhere else

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Hot

It’s clear as day Mrs Grant wanted to join especially when Nikki asks her about wanting Ellie tits

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