All Comments on 'The Dare Ch. 01'

Please continue

Please continue...

Needed some proof reading, but not bad so far. Please continue with another chapter and the category is fine.

loved it more please

Keep it up, continue please. Oh, and no, I think this story belong in loving wife, not fetish.

Definitely keep it going!

It certainly grabbed me and, wouldn't you know, gave me a good start on a woody!

Please continue this story.

Want more of this!

CHAPTER2 IS NEEDED

please continue.....

Good story but she needs the cock in her

You can't start up a good story and just LEAVE it like that. NEXT CHAPTER!!

OMG, how disappointing to get to the end and have no second chapter. This is like Dallas leaving us hanging with "Who Shot JR". OK, many won't get that, but I am a 54 year old woman and found Literotica when my husband left it open one day. He doesn't know it, but since I found Literotica I can't keep my fingers out of my panties, I probably masturbate more than him now. Literotica has also made me more adverturous in bed.

This stroy, to be blunt, made my cunt wet. I seldom use the C word, except when I am REALLY horny and this story did it for me. It makes me want to go dancing, and for you younger readers, please don't be disgusted that a woman or my age still likes to fuck, now THAT word I love. I still have a pussy and have swallowed more of my husband's cum that most of you and my body, yes with a boob lift, is a tight as when I was 35.

Please write more. I am planning to leave this open for my husband to find. Maybe we WILL go dancing, with your help.

Hopefully you follow up. What happens at the house & what will be her follow-up dare for him? You have a gift for writing, easy to read & erotic. Thanks for your effort....Pat (knotz2u@yahoo.com)

BTW I voted 5 stars

... you really can't spell. Their... Rigid...

Go for the second part. You have a plot and a sequence, and will be interesting to see where this goes

WOW nice story but, you need to finish it

Finish it but please dont make this a cuck fucking story, It has a good start

please continue, a fun road it can be!

Just wondering what she has planned for hubby after she makes this guy cum?

Yes! Continue already!

Great start to a fun story.

Nothing but a tease. So disappointed I was wet and wanting more.

Great storey almost all the comments are to continue for 12 years, please don’t be a tease! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

do not waste your time reading it, he did not finish the story and never uploaded the other chapters. Great story plot but very aggravatingly unfinished 12 years later