All Comments on 'New Year's Evening'

sad rememberance...and nice to be back ;-)

what?????????

no labia. I would try to chop a bit on L1 and L2 better balance, Overall good sturdy stuff

... pared for even better effect, vrose, but really like your 'tangible darkness' and your final line especially. 'stole my darkness'. yum

Not sure about the bioluminescent mushrooms, but that's just a personal view.

I love the way in this you capture a particular moment in time and make it your own until the party-goers steal it. So tightly phrased - excellent.

The rational content of the poem escapes him, but then he is not much of a party-goer, and perhaps such events are common among poets with more friends. An interesting poem, nonetheless, although Poet Guy wonders a bit about the punctuation (he thinks that semi-colon is wrong and that, instead, L4 should be set off by either commas or em dashes).