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A Bed Time Story

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by Anonymous

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by BigJohn60101/05/11

A story worthy of Chaucer....

But I doubt we will see it in English literature.

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by Anonymous01/05/11

Mmmmmmmmmm

Now THAT was hot!

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by svenjolly01/05/11

Good attempt

But there were several spelling and grammar mistakes that really hurt you. You call him a Rouge Knight, which would be a knight wearing make-up. You mean a Rogue Knight.

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very good*****

good read!

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by pilotgal01/28/11

Great descriptions! I look forward to reading more.

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by Anonymous09/22/14

He's not a lord

He's a knight... So she wouldn't refer to him as a lord... Only as a Sir... Really ruins the whole thing.

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