But I doubt we will see it in English literature.
Now THAT was hot!
But there were several spelling and grammar mistakes that really hurt you. You call him a Rouge Knight, which would be a knight wearing make-up. You mean a Rogue Knight.
Great descriptions! I look forward to reading more.
He's a knight... So she wouldn't refer to him as a lord... Only as a Sir... Really ruins the whole thing.
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission!
orBack to A Bed Time Story
orMore submissions by MikeIvy.
Edit comment orSubmit Comment
Comment posted successfully - click here to view it or write another.
Title of your comment:
Your public comment about A Bed Time Story:
Please type in the security codeYou may also listen to a recording of the characters.
Title your feedback:
Your feedback to MikeIvy:
If you would like a response, enter your email address in this box:
Feedback sent successfully - click here to write another.
Login or Sign Up
All contents © Copyright 1998-2012. Literotica is a trademark. No part may be reproduced in any form without explicit written permission.
Terms Of Services|Report A Problem|Privacy
Password:Forgot your password?
Your current user avatar, all sizes:
You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.
Select new user avatar:
Upload and save
User avatar uploaded successfuly and waiting for moderation.