All Comments on 'The Seven Sexy Sins'

Great first effort. Very clean writing. Sexy and realistic. Readers love knowing what's going on in our minds ... you provide good detail balanced with erotic and fun little moments. Kudos.

A great first effort, in more ways than one. Keep writing.

Great job. Loved your story.

More please.

Nathan

Well done! Not only very hot but genuinely funny - and I usually find sex comedy to be neither sexy nor comedic. So, a story that is both a turn-on and also laugh out funny. Absolutely loved it. Thank you for posting.