All Comments on 'Hostile Ch. 08'

great chapter can not wait for next one

pleeese keep writing!

I thought you did a great job with her first time. It was very sweet and it showed his caring and gentle nature. This girl has serious emotional issues. How could she start freaking out to the point of hurting herself to get away from someone who has been selfless in caring for her when she was ill and in teaching her how to make love. She really is emotionally crippled. It was kinda rude to just leave and have Jake find her missing without any note or explanation. One minute she's thinking of having a child with him and the next she is running from him like demons from hell are after her. It seems off. It doesn't make sense.

waiting eagerly for the next chapters

I liked this chapter very much, until her "escape" toward home--it doesn't really make sense why she ran off, or how. Shouldn't he have noticed her trying to leave, if they sleep together? Why, after learning to trust him, did she suddenly get absorbed by her nightmares to the point of blotting out all reason and logic?

Hopefully, it will make more sense to me in the next chapter. Can't wait!

Can't wait for more chapters. Reaistic Sci Fi. One can visualize the stroy as they read.