All Comments on 'Spanking Jamie'

Your story doesn't flow. First the girl is younger than you, then older, then the same age. Your editing needs help as well. Good try though.

Would love a story about your first anal!

and ur wrong it does flow i was fingering myself before the second paragaph

Your story was fun to read. Yes it was rough around the edges and desperate for some editing, but all the same it was a strangely refreshing read. Well done, there is a place for this type of writing.

its ok not a bad story but uou need to read over it xxxx

Rubbing my clit... Uff...

Very well written

It got me off.

Mhmm..that ass must be beautiful! I would love if someone did that to me...😜😗😋