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twelveoonetwelveooneover 13 years ago
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I'm tired, can I just say I like it?

PoetGuyPoetGuyover 13 years ago
Parts of this work quite well, others not so much.

The extension of the metaphor seems to get a little confused at times, particularly regarding the captain ("you are the gimbal" seems to turn the Admiral into an instrument much like the narrator's sextant).

Overall, though, Poet Guy enjoyed this and found it to be much better than the average Literotica offering.

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