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Just a thought ~ lose that last line

That feeling is implicit throughout ~

That last line is superfluous.

One other detail -

"wrapping it's ghost" should be "wrapping its ghost"

I am more concerned about some of the cliches that are almost inevitable when you have a poem about a very popular topic. I don't know how to avoid them completely, which is why I very rarely use this particular theme in my own poetry.

Perfect contentment ~ found in dreams ~ as two lovers seek that elusive happiness.