All Comments on 'Holly and Jamie Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
good story

Nice to see you continue this adventure. I like how you take it to a limit, and then stop things from getting out of hand. Makes it all the more realistic. Excellent job, looking foward to more, thanks...

I'd be scared too, but maybe also wondering what tht would be like...

Nicole M

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
amazing

This is one of the best realistic series on this site. Please please please continue. More public exposure.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
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Are we ever going to get more of these??? Such great stories we want more. Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Please please more

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
More?

Can we at least know if we are going to hear more about holly and jamie? I get disappointed every time I check. :( Such great stories.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
More please.

Need chapter 5 :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
More

More please...... these are some of the nbest stories on the site.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
More Please

Any chance we can get a few more chapters of this story???

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