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KurokamiKurokamiabout 13 years ago
Well, this is rather special.

I'm glad I checked this out on the strength of your other work; this is a highly effective poem that hits all the right notes without overstaying its welcome and is rather beautiful, in the end. Top-notch job, and I gave it five stars. You've got some real talent, and I know I've said that to you before.

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Allison Kapitein, a.k.a. Allyourbase. Kinky, genderqueer, poly. I write requests if there's enough creative chemistry between you and me. I took some stories down that were here since forever, but I wouldn't write the same way again. If one of them coincidentally was your favo...