All Comments on 'Gift from Outer Space Ch. 07'

continue with this. This is great.

i came into this a bit late but will read the first 6 chapters to catch up. i enjoyed it and am looking forward to reading more of the girls exploits!

lee

This story was so great! I loved everything about it! Please continue this story. Would love to hear more about Macy and Leifa! MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!

loved the series as a whole. can't wait to see what comes next, so please continue. not only do they still need to free macy and leifa. they can visit home before returning to space. what happens if they are caught by family or friends? do the girls want to be freed? do they want to help other avashi to be freed?

Thanks everyone who commented and encouraged me to continue. I am tempted to continue to tell the story of these characters, whom I like very much. Please feel free to post your ideas here or send them to me.

Those were some good ideas, Magus, thanks.

what ever you do dont stop writing a spin off is definatly needed

I really enjoyed this. It's a bit over the top partially. At least for my tastes. But it was very interesting to explore and you did it in a way that didn't offend me. Thank you very much.

You didn’t explore all possibilities of the story. Naming Loki and his fate as one example. It could be interesting to read about that.

But personally I'd say that you should focus on somebody else than Nina and Renee. Their story is told so far and it has a very nice and romantic ending.

Thank you for sharing your imaginations running wild! ;-)

Please continue this story. I have often read stories that make me feel that they are real or that I am experiencing what is going on in the story. This is the first story that not only did I feel like I was experiencing everything but also invaded my dreams with me being the star or co-star. I have read stories of girls becoming dickgirls and if I was given a chance I would gladly give up my male body for a female's body or become a dickgirl because I have often felt that I was born in the wrong body. So please continue this story and write more like it so myself and others can continue to experience the world of your mind.

I didn't comment on the others but these are all fantastic. Thanks.

One of the best I have ever read. If u toned down the sex a bit u could off this as a novel and properly sell it. I haven't been able to stop reading and am disappointed that it ended. Here's hoping for more soon....

Very rare a story can be great in any of the categories but to achieve greatness in just about all the categories within one story is rare, indeed! I became totally engrossed in the story by Chapter 3 with the characters, plot and the sci fi. I totally agree with previous commenter that your story could be cleaned up and be a great sci fi book.

Your story was great. Awesome writing. Loved the pictures, it really helped visualize the story. At times it was a bit boring with all technicals but still pretty awesome. Leifa and macys story should continue as well as the rest of the girls. Maybe loki could come back and talk to the girls or have loki introduce the girls to his other test subjects. Maybe the girls could meet other ashavi or other guys. Maybe one of them can join the pleasure castle or become a mistress. There are so many ways the story could go on. I also agree that this story could be a part novel. Keep up the awesome work and looking forward to reading more from you.

please don't stop the story now!!!! so very much to write about

A Dick with a brain, you really pulled a Wopper of a tail, son.

I was very entertained. Your main character Renee like most girls, don't want to give up their cock, once attached.

Are the sketches yours to ? Good girl art, very cute.

Thanks for the comment! The drawings from "Gift from Outer Space" were all done by me.

You nailed it by the way, the "penis with a brain" and "girl with cock doesn't want to give it up" story devices. I thought they were good for a chuckle, but also helped to advance the plot and/or intensify the scenes.

Just finished this story. Quite interesting in the plot threads.