thx 4 update but the last 2 ch.s is too short ! and in my opin. can put under thesame ch. although a good read as always. thx cutie.
PLS don't forget Jake and Jezebelle. Thanks luvy !!!
japp lpw and behold I sign up! lol
u inspired that 2 me luvy >_
this is tooo short!!! please make your updates more frequent and longer. pleaseeeeee..
I knew that this tragedy was coming but it still is so sad, Thanks for a great update.
Please write longer chapters, preferably moving at a quicker pace! The writing is amazing throughout these chapters but it's moving extremely slow.
yes you are writing short chapters, but i hope they are leading to bigger ones, other than that keep it up( and do diego and his new family figure into dante and tempest getting there heads straight)
is a Great Story, Please Keep it Going I LOVE it!
It was so annoying not to see I Love You continued but PLEASE keep this going asap! i know you've added more ch's recently and maybe want a break but it's you own fault for writing such a good story! :) Keep it coming!!
Okay i know you are busy but please update soon!!!! Ive waited so long for this series to continue and i cant wait for more!! Keep em commin
I like this chain of stories very much. Yes you might write small chapters and might take a while to write them, but hell I understand not having time so what I mean is keep up the good work!
Can't wait for the next chapter :)
UPDATE WOMAN, UPDATE!!
What a story! I simply had to finish all the four chapters at one go. It's like I do not want to miss a single mischievous moment of Tempest's life while she grows up. Just hope the author will continue with this lovely tale and that it will be voted as the Best IR story of 2011.
more more more got to have more story so good
when is the next chapter going to be upload? it a grate story please write more
Please now dont make us wait like this u cant leave the story in limbo. Please update soon.
U know wat, I understand dat sumtyms u run outta motivation but pls can u finish dis story cz I've read ur previous 2 stories n dey r awesomome. Its fine if u dnt reply but I wud really like 2 know wat happens. Mwah thank u
Please please please just don't leave your readers hanging in midway ike this! This is truly a marvelous story and I just don't wanna give up on Tempest and Dante.
B4 u publish an ebook finish this story. I keep checking to see if you have comppleted it.
hey so i absolutly love love LOVE(!!) this story and the characters so can you please finish it or just tell us if you arent going to? because i dont know how much onger i will be able to wait! its practically killing me!!!! so please please please finish :)
oh and P.S. ur an awesome writer.... :)
I check back practicaly every day hoping for an update. This is a great story
I would like to know why you start stories don't finish them and then start new ones? I check back all the time to see if thares anything new on this story and u haven't bothered we are all waiting!!!!
This story is waay to good for you not to finish. Tempest and Dan are oil and water. They dont mix well but it will be such fun trying anyway. PLEASE FINISH.
You didn't finish this??? Aw men!! I knew it was too good to be true! Drat.
i am addicted to your stories. please finish this one. dante and tempest need to be continued.
Please finish this wonderful story.
You have to finish
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