All Comments on 'Jackie the Landlord'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Good one

Very nicely done. Had me fooled all the way.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

It was well written and hot except for the end. Please tell me that wasn't her son.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
That's what "categories" are for

It wasn't bad, but the incest at the end meant it should've been in that category not erotic couplings. Minus stars for that.

EesomeBeastieEesomeBeastieabout 13 years ago

She seemed to go along with his seduction for no good reason at all. She didn't even seem to be swept along by lust. Just a sort of an oh, why not then. Not a very erotic lead in to the sex.

papagrizpapagrizalmost 13 years ago
HAD IT BEEN CORRECTLY CAPTIONED

I never would have read it. I won't vote on it and feel that other of your stories are much much better.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

I wish that would happen to me...

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