by evesummerall
Oh wow! Great story! I love these characters... such interesting people. Well done!
An utterly exquisite story. You wrote the conflict, the crisis, and the resolution perfectly. The character development and the dialogue were expertly handled, also. I look forward to more stories from you. Brava!
Loved the characters. Nice mix of funny and sexy. I really enjoyed it and hope to see more
what could be wrong with that? Good stuff. Keep writing.
Very smart and witty.
"...a sign I was, for all intents and purposes, totally screwed."
Brilliant. Harriet has no respect, stealing your thunder like that. Now it's time to steal hers... ;)
Amazing how much heat you generated in so short a span. Throw in deft characterization, palpable sense of place and crisp, believable dialogue and it couldn't all possibly fit into a single page. Unless the author is extremely skilled.