All Comments on 'Sinning with Sister Ch. 01'

Story is starting to get interesting keep going!

but why an experienced editor? you don't seem to need one

Good beginning to this story. If your planning to eventually turn this into a threesome, give it some time with just him and the sister first.

Please continue! I think you're doing a great job!

Excellent start can't wait for more!!!

Well done great start

Good job of showing Matt's worry and guilt over having his cover blown. Has Chloe really learned his secret? Will she tell Libby? Aaah...

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I was too high to recognize that I'd never shot so much in my life, and rode each wave with choked cries of "Libby, Libby, Libby!" before I passed out.

@@@ ...I know its cute for the plot, and I've actually seen it used in a few stories, but Who the Fuck PASSES OUT after jacking off?! I mean, really! It's beyond ludicrous! ...that and FIRST instinct, inborn from the time you're like thirteen, is the anal need to clean up after yourself and remove all evidence that you did anything! Lol. @@@

Libby's bikini. Guilt hit me like a thunderbolt. What had I done!? You masturbated to your own sister, you sick fucker.

@@@ b.s. Number two, lol. Brothers dont feel any washing, overpowering guilt about jacking off over their sister or aunt or mother or cousin. Nope. Nada. Guilt of maybe getting caught? You betcha, but thats it! @@@

"Chloe's here now?"

"Um, yeah. I said we came back from the cinema together." She seemed a little miffed that I obviously wasn't paying attention to her.

"She went to get you from your room just a moment ago, actually."

@@@ ...[facepalm]...dude, you. Are. So. Fucked. Rofl!! @@@

I felt sick, but not even that could prevent me from saving the image of my sister to my hard drive before closing the browser window.

@@@ But of course, heh! She she the pic, smelled your sweat and cum, and prolly saw you stash the bikini back in her drawer, lol. This is SO going to be interesting, hehe@@@