All Comments on 'Girlfriends Mother'

Good job!

The lady is a wet dream. I should be so lucky...

...until I ran out of film.

...and attached the camera, downloading took minutes; every picture was a good one.

A rare computer with a film interface.

Imre

Goahead and marry the daughter..that way you also have your MIL to fuck.... I fucked my MIL for years...even after I divorced her daughter...we continued for another 10 years or so.......

Sorry, just not my cup of tea.

I say get the mother nd daughter together for an threesome and show them who the alpha male is and Shelagh will leave her husband to be with him and if he's strong enough, Mary Rose will also comply and he will have both motherr and daughters beiong his fuck toys and having his kids

LOL

It was interesting to read how the story developed and there is a possible sequel. Overall a good story with the one exception, minor but it did stand out which was the camera. film or digital? Just a minor point.

English grammar seems to have suffered a setback in the Mother Country.

Consider a Literotica volunteer editor. Your story doesn't have a single likable character, but it's the grammar that makes it difficult to get through. Your potential for good stories is there, though.

The 2 comments regarding the camera are perfectly valid, and I apologise, I could have expanded it, but never thought to, it could been either a digital or a throwaway, the boy only had to take it to a 1 hour shop, had them printed and also put onto a disc, or a digital camera and taken it home anf 'hooked' it up to his computer, please acknowledge my literary inadequacy

"I snapped away until I ran out of film.I went home then, hooked up my computer and attached the camera, downloading took minutes"

How do you download a film camera to a computer, you have to send the film off to to get the pictures back, you can download from your phone,