All Comments on 'Cucked by My Wife's Gym Trainer Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Bloody fucking hot!

Love it! Keep up the writing.

JayS626JayS626over 6 years ago

More please of Yvonne, gym slut..

avidreader173avidreader173almost 4 years ago
Try to get someone else to check your writing.

English is not your first language. For example:

- "Oh you know digital cameras are these days, they are so easy to use."

- "Bob said, "You know a guy, Andy here, has watched me do an in home private workout at his house..."

- "After she had cum, what four counted 4 times"

If you want to be proud of your stories, use an editor. There are so many words missed out, badly constructed sentences, lack of speech marks and lack of punctuation. Getting someone to read through and check your writing really isn't a difficult thing to organize.

It's a bit of a shame. Your stories could be greatly improved if you just put in a little more effort.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Love it.

Love it.

Love it.

It is good for a married woman to be fucked by a stud gym trainer like Bob!

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