All Comments on 'The Voodoo Priestess'

of dark dreams. Some lovely lines and violently juxtaposed ideas. Line 2 lets it down a little--too many syllables. Gorgeous x

well this is pretty shifty, and yes you are, dances away from the expected in delightful ways, and yes you are, best use of Zombies in the past ten years

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I love the abrupt but seamless shifts that pull and push the narrator in and out of the action. You do big things in little poems.

that conjures and writhes. lovin' the humour, but find myself a little confused by the 'beard-burn'... what am i missing? rough-handling?

another unexpected glimpse into the evocative mind of an unusual writer. good to be reading you, V

but quite funny. Typo (first "you're") in the last line. The "beard-burn" seems backwards, unless you mean the voodoo priestess needs a shave.

Poet Guy now has that old Zombies song in his head, and likely will for days. Liked the poem a lot.

Loved it although I tripped over the typo, made me smile and I too will be singing it for days!