All Comments on 'Jenny and the Boys'

Hope there is a part 2!

This wasn't bad, let's see what the next one is like.

Ignore guys who don't post their names on these comments: If they were paying for the story they would have a right to pick nits.

I thought it was hot and hope there is a part 2. A few misspelled words is not a big deal. These stories aren't exactly written for a class. Continue on with this story please!!!

Despite that stupid ass cheek of a guy who uses big words to mesmerize people into think that he has a big and useful vocabulary. It was good keep making.

Good idea, ending could use work. But like how it leaves you wanting more. Constructive Criticism is always helpful =)

Pretty good. I love how the people saying that stories are bad are always anonymous.

The story was good, I liked it, but the writing needs work. Mainly, I guess it's just too unreal.

Definitely continue this story. I think you should try to flesh out the action a little bit more. This could easily have been expanded into a two page story if you had given more detail. Oh...and fuck the assholes who can't offer constructive criticism.

continue this story please! :)

why are people having a debate when all you have to do is use one hand to twist your nipples while the other one has to wank ur hard cock till u spew!! after all it is what we come to this site for.

please continue this story!

Had some difficulties uploading the second part. Should be up in a day or two. Look out for it :)

Can't wait to see the second part!

So, ik I kinda dissapeared for anyone who was ACTUALLY waiting for the second part. I submitte dit today hopefully will be approved.

Just...bad

A bit short but i had fun