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Lucia the Teacher

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by Anonymous02/02/11

Unreadable

I've never commented on a story before. I wanted to like your story but I couldn't force myself to read it all. Way too many typos....using he for her repeatedly....really needs to be proofread before submitting.

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by gimmie_your_load02/02/11

Thanks

This was actually pointed out by a friend, but not untill after the story was submitted. I'm going to try and re-submit a corrected version... though I sincerely hope that your idea of sexuality does not always involve perfect grammar.

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by Anonymous02/02/11

+1 on the typos

All in all, yes, a good story and would like to see more. But lines such as

"as the first massive stream of cum blasted into his lip"

tend to off-put us sometimes.

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by in_use02/02/11

Once again, a very good story...

I got lost enough in the detail that overlooking a typo or two was easy...
I always look forward to your submissions, you never fail to deliver great cock sucking and facial fantasies!

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by tomdiggerski02/03/11

Typo's?

I was so tied up with the story - typo's were the last thing on my mind. Good job.

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by gimmie_your_load02/03/11

Typoes

I'm working on fixing this... but honestly who can read "as the first massive stream of cum blasted into his lip" and do anything but chuckle and the error.

I suppose if you're a massive homophobe you might be bothered by it, but then again if you're that kind of uptight person, you should probably be on your church group website, not literotica!

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by Talin02/03/11

Awesome!

Thanks for another great story!

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by Anonymous02/06/11

Great Story

I saw your story the day it was posted. As a big fan of your writing and stories about fellatio, I gave you a rating of five and wished it could've been more. I can overlook the typos because the story was still a great read for me. Thanks for writing, GML, and I hope to read more soon. RCG

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by Anonymous02/12/11

Incredibly hot!

I love everything about this, from his masturbatory fantasies to her control of his orgasm!

Longshot8ft

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by Scotsman6912/11/11

Deliciously hot

Thank you

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by 2275jr03/07/12

taking his big load of cum over your face

what a very hot horny story Lucia the teacher . brilliant writing awesome very hot erotic story . reading this only got more of a turn on .do keep them cumming

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