All Comments on 'Bitter Regret'

are the best you have ever written Vee. x

i totally agree.

the salt in the eyes thing's pretty good, too, well for me at least.

what's with the comma after lover? it affords a pause when the words are heard, but perhaps i'm having a brain-fart because the comma makes no sense there to me. a line-break would give you the same without being 'off'. i am pretty sleepy atm, so this might be why it's not registering...

No unnecessary words and everything is told in image and metaphor. Publish it!

Great stuff.

Perfect and I hear it sad as that is

as below, Agree, except this is a great line

my womb is an empty ballroom

but gender alignment seems to be off with

in this dream I am a man

100

they said. You get better and better.