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Starship Obama on Valentine's Day

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/01/11

space and time

A quite imaginative and brilliant story. You always come up with new and interesting genres. Once again you have a hit!

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by Anonymous02/01/11

I want to drink from whatever you have been drinking Susan! (lol)

Drew :)

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by Anonymous02/01/11

Flawed science

I loved the concept of the story. It was quite funny with you taking so many liberties. Only, even though I realize this is a fictional story posted on a porn board, you have some flaws in your science about space travel, light-year speed, and aging.

Nonetheless, with that said, I loved the line about there's no crying on a starship. Also, Sarah was the perfect one to put in charge of the gun ship. Lady Gaga, Jenna Jameson? Amazing. What a mind you have.

Then, I realized again that this story is 500 years in the future. Just as what we thought we knew 500 years ago with the world being flat the the Earth the center of the universe, certainly, what we think we know now may not apply to what we know 500 years from now, such as men getting pregnant. Actually, to be honest, when we reached the point where we can travel to other galaxies, what we know as laws may be totally the opposite. Great job.

It was a fun read. Good luck in the contest.

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you went into a ridiculous amount of detail on the ship's FTL capabilities and weird time dilation effects, which ultimately had no effect on the story whatsoever. also it was weird that the captain called Ralph a "girly man", considering women are supposed to be the superior sex in this story.

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by Anonymous02/02/11

Obama Zombie Can't Write Either

You are so african that your lips are bigger than your ass. You are not only stupid but a black racist. Doom on you!

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by shango02/02/11

veddy eenteresting!

I liked it!!!

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by EesomeBeastie02/04/11

Introduction far too long

The introduction was far too long. Some of that could have been dropped completely, and some could have been woven into the main story.

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