All Comments on 'Donna and Kevin's Valentine Gift'

by Boxlicker101

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Phxray54Phxray54about 13 years ago
Ahhh

Acceptance, warms the heart. Thank you for sharing your talent.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Interesting story line

not sure I've ever seen its like anywhere here.

At the end, I'm left hoping she'll be OK, she has so much baggage she has to carry through life.

northlandernorthlanderabout 13 years ago
Good for Kevin and Donna

To look after a child properly, without payment and just love is a wonderful thing. There are many foster parents, most are there to help the child. but there are others who are in it for the money. A nice Story about a good family

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
enjoyed the story

I really enjoyed this story. I know more than one couple that have adopted children of other races. You have written sequels to some stories here. Really would like to see this made into a series.

Boxlicker101Boxlicker101about 13 years agoAuthor
To Anon.

I'm glad you enjoyed the story. It was quite pleasant to write, partly because I am such a softy. This is the sixth story so far in this series, and I will probably add at least one more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Shauna

As Shauna is now an important part of the story, you need to extend the story.

PrincessErinPrincessErinabout 13 years ago
Awesome

I love these characters and am happy you wrote another story about them.

DG HearDG Hearabout 13 years ago
Nicely done

Very nicely done Box. A very nice read. Just proves you don't need a lot of sex to have an interesting story. That doesn't mean that we don't want to read your more slutty ones. haha

With respect

DG

HansTrimbleHansTrimbleabout 12 years ago
Great climax!

As the story was winding down to the end, I expected that Shauna would give Kevin a kiss on the cheek. But your ending was so much better! This is really one of the most interesting and best written of the whole series of Donna and Kevin stories. Really well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great story

Well written wonderfull story! Every thing about it was perfect, loved the ending with the little Girl finally able to give Kevin her trust, and Love.

Jim

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