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twelveoonetwelveooneabout 13 years ago
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This is one line, I've never seen.-Good

Nipples pebble, reach.

The others, well, cliched

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tigerjentigerjenabout 13 years ago

It's all about the eyes.....well done :)

UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellabout 13 years ago
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As has been said already it is very clichéd although I do like the last two lines

SweetOblivionSweetOblivionabout 13 years ago
There is a real driving force to this poem

Hope the havoc and sexual intoxication had a wonderful source. M

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