All Comments on 'Build the Moon Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
More Pleaz

More how you just gone leave me hangin' like that, give me more!

lillizlillizabout 13 years ago
nice beginning

Good beginning... would love to see more, please continue! :D

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
more..

More more more

SunsilkWaterSunsilkWaterabout 13 years ago
Ooo~

You caught my attention from start to finish :3 I think this might be one of the shortest entries I enjoyed that had me guessing and picturing what would happen next. Great beginning :D

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Wow....

I usually don't comment, tho I read stories daily. Me and my girlfriend both love the story and can't wait for the next part. Good writing :)

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