All Comments on 'The Training of a Young Submissive Ch. 01'

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curioussandy88curioussandy88about 13 years ago
Nice start...

I'm not much of a writer, but I love reading... and this promises to be fantastic!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Brilliant

Well written and beautiful start. Well worth the 5*'s !!!

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftabout 13 years ago
I couldn't agree more with what has been said already.

And please make sure you have explicit details on this journey.

Thank you in advance.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Enjoying it--do write more!

Gentle and exciting!

estragonestragonabout 13 years ago
Well Begun is Half Done

So tell me more...who is Annie? Who is Sam? Build the characters as you build the training.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
look forwards to more

i hope this develops will be looking out for more!

fishingrod48fishingrod48about 13 years ago
Great Start

We need more about Annie and Sam can't wait for the following chapters

Lo_PanLo_Panabout 12 years ago
What is it with BDSM writers.....

What is it with writers, and really young girls with much, much older men?

Scotsman69Scotsman69about 12 years ago
A fine start...

Looking forward to it unfolding further.

joodlejoodlealmost 12 years ago
Looking for new material

I have been searching for a story recently that can compare with those of the best authors, Goldeniangel, Wishfulthinking, DrMabeuse, etc. I think I have uncovered a new one. Reading on!

wally7493wally7493over 9 years ago
excellant story

I was very impressed with you writing style and the story. I was hardly able to put it down. A very captivating story.

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